Friday, 30 October 2020

 The Witch by Jericho


There was a witch she was on the way to the princess house. She had a really evil  idea to tun the princess in to a frog and everyone in to a witch and the witch was going to Marry the Prince. 


 The princess name was Matilda. Matilda had long black hair and she was (skinny)( little)  and are princess one day she was wearing one of her most favourite dress it was paint and short and little and skinny like her 


But that day she didn't know that she was going to get turned into a frog and the Prince was going to marry the witch everybody else was going to turn into a witch  



Finally the witch had finished her evil plan then  it all went into a disaster. The king had found out what she was doing. He had sent over a group of knights to defeat her but she was too strong she had cast the spell on all the knights. They were all turned into witches the End. By Jericho Image result for animated witch
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 October 2020 at 11:31

    its very interesting but there is some spelling mistakes!

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  2. Anonymous30 October 2020 at 11:39

    kia ora jericho, i really like your style of writing an how you added the witch at the bottom. I have written a story like this aswell. an idea to improve your writing is to put some more sentances in a paragraph.

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  3. Anonymous27 November 2020 at 11:38

    thank you

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